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【<】【p】【>】【我】【里】【地】【球】【有】【1】【&】【m】【i】【d】【d】【o】【t】【;】【5】【亿】【千】【米】【,】【如】【果】【步】【行】【道】【我】【这】【里】【,】【日】【夜】【不】【停】【地】【走】【,】【需】【要】【走】【3】【5】【0】【0】【年】【;】【如】【果】【坐】【你】【们】【那】【里】【最】【快】【的】【交】【通】【工】【具】【&】【m】【d】【a】【s】【h】【;】【&】【m】【d】【a】【s】【h】【;】【飞】【机】【<】【u】【>】【作】【文】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【w】【w】【w】【.】【z】【u】【o】【w】【e】【n】【8】【.】【c】【o】【m】【<】【/】【u】【>】【,】【也】【要】【二】【十】【几】【年】【。】【这】【么】【远】【,】【箭】【不】【可】【能】【射】【的】【到】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【是】【中】【考】【语】【文】【试】【卷】【中】【的】【“】【半】【壁】【江】【山】【”】【,】【它】【需】【要】【精】【益】【求】【精】【,】【才】【能】【在】【众】【多】【优】【秀】【作】【文】【中】【脱】【颖】【而】【出】【。】【得】【到】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【青】【睐】【,】【从】【而】【获】【取】【高】【分】【。】【纵】【观】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【,】【不】【难】【发】【现】【,】【文】【章】【中】【无】【不】【闪】【烁】【着】【一】【个】【“】【精】【”】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【精】【深】【的】【主】【题】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【主】【题】【是】【文】【章】【的】【灵】【魂】【,】【作】【文】【没】【有】【高】【远】【的】【主】【题】【就】【会】【显】【得】【低】【俗】【浅】【薄】【。】【只】【有】【积】【极】【、】【精】【深】【的】【主】【题】【才】【会】【得】【到】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【赏】【识】【。】【如】【湖】【南】【邵】【阳】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【冬】【天】【里】【的】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【》】【就】【是】【撷】【取】【生】【活】【中】【的】【小】【片】【断】【,】【通】【过】【描】【写】【“】【一】【句】【叮】【咛】【”】【“】【一】【份】【关】【怀】【”】【来】【体】【现】【赞】【美】【美】【好】【生】【活】【的】【大】【主】【题】【。】【又】【如】【湖】【北】【荆】【州】【市】【某】【考】【生】【的】【《】【聆】【听】【生】【命】【拔】【节】【的】【声】【音】【》】【,】【就】【是】【用】【“】【童】【稚】【之】【声】【—】【—】【短】【笛】【无】【腔】【信】【口】【吹】【”】【“】【豆】【蔻】【之】【声】【—】【—】【羌】【笛】【何】【须】【怨】【杨】【柳】【”】【“】【花】【季】【之】【声】【—】【—】【玉】【笛】【叫】【空】【阔】【”】【三】【个】【小】【标】【题】【,】【写】【出】【自】【己】【“】【童】【稚】【”】【时】【喜】【欢】【吃】【田】【鸡】【肉】【,】【“】【豆】【蔻】【”】【时】【懂】【得】【青】【蛙】【是】【益】【类】【动】【物】【,】【“】【花】【季】【”】【时】【却】【积】【极】【宣】【传】【保】【护】【青】【蛙】【及】【有】【益】【动】【物】【。】【这】【成】【长】【的】【声】【音】【吹】【响】【了】【“】【保】【护】【生】【态】【”】【这】【一】【大】【主】【题】【,】【从】【而】【夺】【得】【高】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【,】【我】【们】【同】【样】【也】【可】【以】【从】【极】【其】【普】【通】【的】【身】【边】【小】【事】【中】【挖】【掘】【出】【鲜】【明】【深】【刻】【的】【主】【题】【。】【如】【汇】【聚】【厚】【重】【历】【史】【的】【老】【传】【统】【;】【凝】【聚】【时】【代】【气】【息】【的】【新】【气】【象】【;】【颂】【扬】【祖】【国】【河】【山】【的】【美】【好】【;】【倡】【导】【绿】【色】【环】【保】【的】【重】【要】【…】【…】【总】【之】【,】【生】【活】【的】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【可】【以】【使】【我】【们】【的】【作】【文】【异】【彩】【纷】【呈】【,】【意】【蕴】【厚】【重】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【精】【妙】【的】【开】【头】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【常】【言】【道】【“】【明】【眸】【善】【睐】【第】【一】【瞥】【”】【。】【文】【章】【如】【果】【有】【~】【个】【精】【妙】【的】【开】【头】【,】【就】【会】【吸】【引】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【球】【,】【让】【人】【有】【一】【种】【赏】【心】【悦】【目】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【全】【国】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【中】【有】【这】【样】【几】【种】【成】【功】【的】【开】【头】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【环】【境】【渲】【染】【气】【氛】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【死】【了】【,】【黑】【暗】【统】【治】【着】【这】【个】【世】【界】【,】【灯】【光】【死】【去】【时】【发】【出】【的】【凄】【惨】【叫】【声】【还】【在】【空】【中】【荡】【漾】【,】【虽】【然】【声】【音】【很】【低】【却】【是】【无】【处】【不】【在】【,】【角】【落】【里】【也】【似】【乎】【有】【极】【其】【低】【微】【的】【哭】【泣】【。】【手】【捧】【着】【一】【张】【张】【写】【满】【愁】【容】【的】【试】【卷】【让】【我】【感】【到】【未】【来】【的】【渺】【茫】【,】【欢】【乐】【的】【时】【期】【已】【经】【过】【去】【,】【现】【在】【是】【悲】【戚】【的】【时】【候】【了】【。】【(】【《】【看】【着】【前】【方】【》】【牡】【丹】【江】【市】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【开】【篇】【环】【境】【描】【写】【的】【巧】【妙】【运】【用】【,】【创】【设】【了】【一】【种】【独】【特】【的】【意】【境】【,】【已】【将】【人】【物】【内】【心】【展】【现】【得】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【,】【扣】【住】【了】【读】【者】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【名】【言】【诗】【句】【引】【用】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【孙】【子】【兵】【法】【》】【云】【:】【千】【千】【为】【敌】【,】【一】【人】【胜】【之】【,】【未】【若】【自】【胜】【,】【为】【战】【中】【上】【。】【(】【《】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【百】【战】【不】【殆】【》】【广】【西】【河】【池】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【篇】【即】【引】【用】【了】【《】【孙】【子】【兵】【法】【》】【中】【的】【名】【句】【来】【表】【达】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【有】【着】【纲】【举】【目】【张】【的】【作】【用】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【设】【问】【反】【问】【悬】【念】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【条】【街】【你】【熟】【悉】【吗】【?】【熟】【悉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【聆】【听】【到】【这】【街】【的】【声】【音】【吗】【?】【没】【有】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【欣】【赏】【过】【这】【街】【的】【美】【景】【吗】【?】【没】【有】【。】【(】【《】【熟】【悉】【的】【地】【方】【也】【有】【风】【景】【》】【苏】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【以】【设】【问】【句】【起】【笔】【,】【开】【篇】【就】【设】【置】【悬】【念】【,】【老】【街】【既】【然】【熟】【悉】【,】【却】【为】【什】【么】【没】【有】【聆】【听】【过】【声】【音】【也】【没】【有】【欣】【赏】【过】【美】【景】【?】【这】【不】【是】【与】【文】【章】【题】【目】【矛】【盾】【吗】【?】【开】【篇】【就】【激】【发】【着】【读】【者】【的】【阅】【读】【兴】【趣】【。】【这】【也】【自】【然】【引】【出】【了】【下】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【开】【宗】【明】【义】【题】【记】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爱】【,】【无】【声】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【天】【空】【;】【爱】【,】【无】【言】【,】【滋】【润】【了】【心】【田】【。】【多】【想】【留】【住】【一】【段】【时】【光】【,】【留】【住】【你】【的】【容】【颜】【。】【你】【的】【馈】【赠】【如】【那】【滔】【滔】【江】【水】【,】【一】【生】【用】【之】【不】【竭】【。】【—】【—】【题】【记】【(】【《】【父】【亲】【的】【馈】【赠】【》】【山】【东】【淄】【博】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【巧】【妙】【运】【用】【题】【记】【,】【把】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【表】【达】【出】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【5】【.】【自】【然】【起】【笔】【点】【题】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【种】【把】【事】【情】【的】【开】【头】【作】【为】【文】【章】【开】【头】【的】【自】【然】【起】【笔】【法】【,】【它】【的】【风】【格】【朴】【素】【自】【然】【,】【有】【韵】【味】【天】【成】【的】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【学】【校】【三】【令】【五】【申】【说】【不】【准】【带】【手】【机】【到】【校】【,】【你】【们】【家】【长】【为】【什】【么】【老】【是】【纵】【容】【孩】【子】【,】【不】【与】【学】【校】【保】【持】【一】【致】【呢】【?】【”】【老】【师】【最】【后】【几】【句】【话】【几】【乎】【是】【吼】【出】【来】【的】【,】【满】【含】【不】【满】【与】【责】【备】【。】【妈】【妈】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【赔】【着】【不】【是】【,】【那】【神】【情】【那】【态】【度】【那】【是】【她】【平】【常】【的】【样】【子】【吗】【?】【(】【《】【拥】【抱】【》】【四】【川】【成】【都】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【样】【开】【头】【简】【洁】【明】【了】【,】【一】【下】【子】【就】【将】【读】【者】【带】【入】【了】【情】【境】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【精】【瑟】【的】【精】【节】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【文】【似】【看】【山】【不】【喜】【平】【”】【,】【精】【彩】【的】【情】【节】【仿】【佛】【引】【领】【读】【者】【在】【旖】【旎】【风】【光】【中】【穿】【行】【,】【或】【“】【柳】【暗】【花】【明】【又】【一】【村】【”】【或】【“】【横】【看】【成】【岭】【侧】【成】【峰】【”】【或】【“】【曲】【径】【通】【幽】【处】【”】【,】【使】【读】【者】【在】【曲】【折】【与】【起】【伏】【中】【心】【潮】【澎】【湃】【,】【获】【得】【无】【限】【乐】【趣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【为】【了】【优】【化】【情】【节】【,】【追】【求】【曲】【折】【有】【致】【,】【有】【些】【作】【品】【或】【张】【弛】【有】【度】【或】【悬】【念】【迭】【起】【,】【或】【虚】【实】【相】【生】【或】【双】【线】【交】【替】【。】【跌】【宕】【起】【伏】【的】【情】【节】【使】【故】【事】【波】【澜】【起】【伏】【,】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【。】【“】【情】【节】【突】【转】【”】【的】【手】【法】【,】【令】【人】【拍】【案】【叫】【绝】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【期】【末】【考】【试】【到】【了】【,】【我】【聚】【精】【会】【神】【地】【趴】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【复】【习】【着】【。】【不】【知】【何】【时】【,】【阳】【光】【笼】【罩】【了】【我】【,】【使】【我】【额】【头】【沁】【出】【了】【汗】【珠】【。】【这】【时】【,】【数】【学】【老】【师】【又】【一】【次】【敲】【响】【了】【我】【的】【桌】【子】【:】【“】【你】【,】【坐】【到】【那】【边】【去】【考】【试】【。】【”】【我】【愣】【住】【了】【。】【老】【师】【竟】【然】【对】【我】【如】【此】【不】【信】【任】【!】【老】【师】【对】【我】【的】【成】【见】【竟】【然】【有】【这】【么】【深】【!】【我】【再】【也】【忍】【耐】【不】【住】【,】【泪】【水】【就】【要】【冲】【出】【眼】【眶】【了】【。】【老】【师】【也】【愣】【住】【了】【,】【随】【即】【,】【他】【似】【乎】【明】【白】【了】【什】【么】【,】【轻】【轻】【地】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【这】【里】【太】【晒】【,】【影】【响】【你】【做】【题】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【如】【此】【。】【原】【本】【以】【为】【老】【师】【误】【解】【了】【我】【,】【谁】【知】【却】【是】【我】【误】【解】【了】【老】【师】【!】【我】【的】【泪】【水】【不】【由】【得】【流】【了】【出】【来】【…】【…】【(】【《】【阳】【光】【灿】【烂】【的】【日】【子】【》】【山】【东】【济】【南】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【是】【一】【件】【考】【试】【时】【调】【换】【座】【位】【的】【平】【常】【小】【事】【,】【被】【作】【者】【精】【心】【打】【造】【后】【,】【使】【文】【章】【前】【后】【隋】【节】【突】【转】【,】【波】【澜】【顿】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【精】【当】【的】【措】【词】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【山】【不】【在】【高】【,】【有】【仙】【则】【名】【;】【水】【不】【在】【深】【,】【有】【龙】【则】【灵】【”】【。】【作】【文】【中】【的】【措】【词】【更】【不】【在】【多】【,】【精】【当】【的】【措】【词】【有】【着】【“】【四】【两】【拨】【千】【斤】【”】【的】【显】【著】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【白】【驹】【过】【隙】【般】【滑】【过】【爸】【爸】【的】【背】【,】【掠】【过】【爷】【爷】【的】【胡】【子】【,】【穿】【过】【我】【的】【指】【间】【,】【而】【我】【的】【那】【颗】【童】【心】【也】【慢】【慢】【成】【长】【了】【。】【(】【《】【长】【大】【的】【童】【心】【》】【浙】【江】【温】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【滑】【”】【“】【掠】【”】【“】【穿】【”】【三】【个】【动】【词】【生】【动】【地】【展】【现】【了】【时】【光】【飞】【逝】【,】【“】【我】【”】【的】【童】【心】【就】【在】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【中】【长】【大】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【天】【空】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【风】【雨】【雷】【电】【的】【一】【时】【肆】【虐】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【辽】【阔】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【大】【海】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【惊】【涛】【骇】【浪】【的】【一】【时】【猖】【獗】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【深】【邃】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【森】【林】【不】【宽】【容】【。】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【弱】【肉】【强】【食】【的】【一】【时】【规】【律】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【原】【始】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【宇】【宙】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【星】【座】【裂】【变】【的】【一】【时】【更】【替】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【神】【秘】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【时】【间】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【各】【色】【人】【等】【的】【一】【时】【虚】【掷】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【延】【续】【之】【美】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【宽】【容】【成】【就】【了】【它】【们】【。】【(】【《】【告】【别】【狭】【隘】【之】【心】【》】【一】【考】【毕】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【段】【文】【字】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【用】【词】【精】【练】【,】【运】【用】【铺】【陈】【排】【比】【的】【手】【法】【,】【使】【文】【章】【更】【具】【思】【维】【的】【深】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【、】【精】【练】【的】【叙】【述】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【或】【用】【巧】【妙】【的】【手】【法】【,】【或】【用】【恰】【当】【的】【顺】【序】【,】【使】【叙】【述】【顺】【畅】【精】【彩】【,】【但】【这】【并】【不】【意】【味】【着】【叙】【述】【得】【越】【多】【越】【好】【,】【而】【是】【以】【简】【洁】【明】【了】【为】【妙】【。】【只】【有】【内】【涵】【深】【刻】【、】【情】【节】【生】【动】【、】【能】【突】【出】【主】【题】【的】【具】【体】【材】【料】【才】【详】【写】【,】【次】【要】【作】【用】【的】【内】【容】【就】【只】【能】【作】【概】【括】【叙】【述】【。】【精】【练】【的】【叙】【述】【使】【文】【章】【清】【晰】【利】【落】【,】【结】【构】【紧】【凑】【。】【如】【南】【京】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【也】【是】【一】【堂】【语】【文】【课】【》】【是】【从】【不】【同】【角】【度】【选】【择】【典】【型】【事】【例】【来】【突】【出】【中】【心】【的】【。】【有】【给】【网】【上】【的】【信】【箱】【发】【勘】【误】【信】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【自】【豪】【感】【受】【;】【有】【参】【加】【学】【校】【艺】【术】【节】【的】【朗】【诵】【表】【演】【活】【动】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【成】【果】【;】【有】【春】【节】【家】【庭】【联】【欢】【会】【接】【对】【联】【比】【赛】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【快】【乐】【。】【三】【件】【事】【例】【紧】【扣】【生】【活】【“】【也】【是】【一】【堂】【语】【文】【课】【”】【这】【一】【中】【心】【,】【有】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【又】【详】【略】【有】【致】【。】【其】【中】【第】【三】【件】【事】【最】【有】【代】【表】【性】【,】【也】【很】【风】【趣】【,】【作】【者】【就】【突】【出】【的】【对】【话】【与】【心】【理】【进】【行】【详】【写】【,】【而】【其】【他】【两】【事】【就】【略】【写】【。】【这】【样】【精】【练】【的】【处】【理】【有】【助】【于】【凸】【现】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【。】看直播【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【对】【于】【曾】【经】【的】【我】【来】【说】【是】【一】【种】【可】【怕】【的】【存】【在】【。】【传】【说】【,】【初】【三】【的】【学】【生】【面】【对】【的】【是】【恶】【狼】【般】【让】【人】【无】【招】【架】【之】【力】【的】【考】【试】【、】【超】【级】【繁】【重】【的】【作】【业】【、】【硕】【大】【的】【书】【包】【,】【与】【两】【只】【有】【蔓】【延】【到】【下】【巴】【嫌】【疑】【的】【“】【熊】【猫】【眼】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【然】【,】【这】【种】【“】【传】【说】【”】【有】【夸】【大】【现】【实】【的】【嫌】【疑】【,】【不】【过】【若】【是】【去】【掉】【一】【些】【形】【容】【词】【,】【初】【三】【生】【活】【的】【轮】【廓】【已】【经】【基】【本】【呈】【现】【在】【你】【眼】【前】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刚】【刚】【步】【入】【初】【三】【的】【我】【,】【怀】【揣】【一】【颗】【紧】【张】【又】【十】【分】【期】【待】【的】【心】【,】【还】【算】【圆】【满】【地】【考】【完】【了】【第】【一】【次】【重】【要】【的】【考】【试】【—】【—】【摸】【底】【考】【。】【这】【次】【考】【试】【给】【了】【我】【一】【定】【的】【信】【心】【,】【让】【我】【对】【于】【“】【传】【说】【”】【的】【紧】【张】【感】【有】【了】【点】【点】【的】【平】【复】【。】【于】【是】【,】【在】【开】【学】【的】【头】【一】【个】【星】【期】【,】【我】【感】【觉】【一】【切】【都】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【的】【第】【二】【周】【,】【作】【业】【量】【开】【始】【稳】【步】【上】【升】【,】【一】【个】【月】【过】【去】【了】【,】【作】【业】【和】【考】【试】【像】【沸】【水】【冒】【泡】【—】【样】【蜂】【拥】【而】【出】【,】【愈】【发】【勇】【猛】【。】【面】【对】【这】【些】【有】【着】【向】【“】【传】【说】【”】【发】【展】【趋】【势】【的】【情】【况】【,】【我】【终】【于】【意】【识】【到】【,】【初】【三】【生】【活】【可】【不】【是】【轻】【轻】【松】【松】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【由】【于】【按】【照】【以】【前】【的】【作】【息】【安】【排】【学】【习】【,】【我】【无】【法】【保】【证】【按】【时】【完】【成】【计】【划】【的】【内】【容】【,】【我】【每】【天】【不】【得】【不】【到】【凌】【晨】【才】【睡】【觉】【,】【时】【间】【一】【长】【,】【听】【课】【效】【率】【不】【如】【以】【前】【,】【最】【糟】【糕】【的】【是】【我】【的】【成】【绩】【开】【始】【有】【下】【滑】【的】【危】【险】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【了】【危】【机】【感】【的】【我】【开】【始】【做】【自】【我】【分】【析】【—】【—】【回】【家】【一】【定】【要】【先】【写】【作】【业】【,】【不】【能】【像】【原】【来】【那】【样】【先】【休】【息】【一】【会】【儿】【才】【动】【笔】【了】【;】【写】【作】【业】【的】【时】【候】【也】【不】【可】【以】【东】【摸】【摸】【西】【碰】【碰】【,】【一】【定】【要】【抓】【紧】【时】【间】【;】【平】【时】【在】【学】【校】【争】【取】【多】【完】【成】【些】【作】【业】【,】【这】【样】【回】【家】【学】【习】【的】【时】【间】【更】【多】【…】【…】【分】【析】【完】【毕】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【感】【叹】【:】【是】【要】【抓】【紧】【啊】【,】【根】【本】【没】【有】【时】【间】【容】【我】【休】【闲】【娱】【乐】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【及】【时】【的】【调】【整】【,】【让】【我】【阻】【止】【了】【成】【绩】【下】【滑】【的】【趋】【势】【,】【并】【且】【逐】【渐】【使】【成】【绩】【上】【升】【。】【这】【种】【上】【升】【是】【缓】【慢】【的】【,】【但】【在】【一】【段】【时】【间】【后】【,】【我】【终】【于】【掌】【握】【了】【规】【律】【,】【不】【再】【像】【刚】【开】【始】【那】【样】【成】【天】【困】【得】【睁】【不】【开】【眼】【,】【而】【是】【将】【时】【间】【以】【新】【的】【方】【式】【安】【排】【得】【游】【刃】【有】【余】【,】【不】【光】【按】【时】【完】【成】【每】【天】【应】【做】【的】【,】【还】【留】【出】【—】【部】【分】【时】【间】【让】【自】【己】【消】【化】【当】【天】【的】【知】【识】【,】【预】【习】【新】【的】【内】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【学】【期】【的】【题】【海】【战】【术】【让】【我】【被】【迫】【改】【变】【了】【舒】【适】【懒】【散】【的】【学】【习】【习】【惯】【,】【而】【改】【变】【后】【的】【我】【却】【得】【到】【了】【不】【少】【好】【处】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【学】【期】【开】【始】【了】【,】【我】【信】【心】【满】【怀】【地】【踏】【入】【校】【园】【,】【惊】【喜】【地】【发】【现】【这】【学】【期】【的】【作】【业】【量】【大】【大】【减】【少】【,】【不】【过】【都】【是】【留】【给】【我】【的】【自】【主】【复】【习】【时】【间】【。】【就】【在】【我】【以】【为】【初】【三】【生】【活】【可】【以】【有】【所】【放】【松】【的】【时】【候】【,】【体】【育】【老】【师】【又】【扔】【来】【一】【排】【响】【雷】【—】【—】【体】【育】【标】【准】【上】【升】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【对】【于】【体】【育】【不】【好】【的】【我】【来】【说】【是】【当】【头】【一】【棒】【,】【我】【痛】【下】【决】【心】【,】【不】【光】【回】【家】【要】【练】【体】【育】【,】【在】【学】【校】【,】【放】【学】【后】【也】【要】【练】【!】【于】【是】【,】【每】【天】【放】【学】【后】【,】【我】【都】【和】【几】【个】【同】【学】【—】【起】【到】【操】【场】【上】【奋】【力】【地】【练】【习】【,】【天】【快】【黑】【了】【才】【回】【家】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【的】【下】【学】【期】【,】【美】【术】【、】【音】【乐】【、】【外】【教】【…】【…】【都】【没】【有】【了】【,】【每】【天】【到】【学】【校】【就】【是】【全】【身】【心】【地】【投】【入】【学】【习】【和】【锻】【炼】【中】【去】【,】【然】【后】【带】【着】【一】【天】【的】【收】【获】【,】【回】【家】【再】【细】【细】【消】【化】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【看】【似】【非】【常】【累】【、】【非】【常】【枯】【燥】【,】【其】【实】【是】【可】【以】【提】【炼】【出】【丝】【丝】【乐】【趣】【的】【。】【要】【知】【道】【,】【累】【的】【不】【是】【我】【一】【个】【人】【,】【每】【个】【努】【力】【的】【同】【学】【都】【是】【一】【样】【的】【。】【在】【我】【们】【身】【边】【还】【有】【老】【师】【、】【家】【长】【在】【给】【我】【们】【鼓】【劲】【儿】【呢】【,】【想】【到】【这】【些】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【心】【里】【还】【是】【很】【愉】【快】【的】【。】【每】【天】【看】【着】【已】【经】【写】【完】【的】【作】【业】【、】【厚】【厚】【的】【笔】【记】【,】【成】【就】【感】【与】【自】【豪】【之】【情】【也】【是】【实】【实】【在】【在】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【的】【我】【早】【已】【从】【容】【看】【待】【初】【三】【生】【活】【了】【,】【初】【三】【生】【活】【就】【是】【这】【样】【的】【,】【虽】【苦】【犹】【甜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【就】【像】【那】【浩】【瀚】【无】【垠】【的】【学】【海】【,】【我】【便】【如】【那】【只】【小】【舟】【,】【在】【时】【而】【惊】【涛】【骇】【浪】【,】【时】【而】【平】【静】【无】【波】【的】【学】【海】【中】【前】【行】【—】【—】【每】【天】【都】【是】【面】【对】【朝】【阳】【,】【意】【气】【风】【发】【,】【向】【着】【成】【功】【彼】【岸】【进】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【礼】【平】【)】

【<】【p】【>】【现】【在】【我】【长】【大】【了】【,】【但】【邻】【居】【叔】【叔】【依】【旧】【送】【我】【一】【些】【他】【的】【精】【美】【作】【品】【给】【我】【。】【前】【不】【久】【,】【他】【送】【给】【我】【一】【幅】【《】【喜】【鹊】【登】【枝】【》】【的】【剪】【纸】【,】【我】【爱】【不】【释】【手】【,】【对】【这】【幅】【剪】【纸】【充】【满】【了】【兴】【趣】【。】【有】【一】【<】【u】【>】【作】【文】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【w】【w】【w】【.】【z】【u】【o】【w】【e】【n】【8】【.】【c】【o】【m】【<】【/】【u】【>】【只】【小】【巧】【玲】【珑】【的】【小】【喜】【鹊】【站】【在】【枝】【头】【上】【神】【气】【勃】【勃】【地】【昂】【着】【头】【望】【着】【那】【一】【轮】【火】【红】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【真】【是】【神】【了】【!】【叔】【叔】【剪】【的】【喜】【鹊】【惟】【妙】【惟】【肖】【,】【立】【在】【枝】【头】【的】【位】【置】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【,】【无】【可】【挑】【剔】【,】【仿】【佛】【一】【蹦】【就】【能】【碰】【到】【我】【的】【鼻】【尖】【似】【的】【。】【它】【好】【像】【在】【向】【人】【们】【通】【报】【喜】【讯】【,】【那】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【的】【样】【子】【,】【一】【看】【就】【明】【了】【这】【是】【个】【天】【大】【的】【好】【消】【息】【。】【看】【着】【活】【泼】【的】【小】【喜】【鹊】【,】【我】【也】【跟】【着】【它】【展】【开】【了】【想】【象】【的】【翅】【膀】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【<】【/】【p】【>】看直播【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【平】【时】【作】【文】【和】【中】【考】【作】【文】【中】【,】【同】【学】【们】【写】【得】【最】【多】【、】【最】【熟】【悉】【、】【最】【拿】【手】【的】【文】【体】【当】【属】【记】【叙】【文】【。】【由】【于】【是】【最】【熟】【悉】【的】【文】【体】【,】【一】【些】【同】【学】【反】【而】【掉】【以】【轻】【心】【,】【出】【现】【了】【一】【些】【不】【应】【有】【的】【失】【误】【。】【现】【针】【对】【这】【些】【失】【误】【提】【出】【相】【应】【对】【策】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【构】【思】【欠】【巧】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【文】【似】【看】【山】【不】【喜】【平】【”】【。】【写】【记】【叙】【文】【最】【忌】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【,】【缺】【乏】【悬】【念】【。】【那】【样】【写】【出】【来】【的】【文】【章】【就】【像】【是】【—】【杯】【白】【开】【水】【,】【淡】【而】【无】【味】【。】【请】【看】【下】【例】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【天】【的】【语】【文】【课】【上】【,】【一】【向】【不】【迟】【到】【的】【班】【长】【刘】【莹】【竟】【然】【迟】【到】【了】【半】【个】【小】【时】【,】【因】【为】【今】【天】【早】【上】【在】【去】【上】【学】【的】【路】【上】【,】【张】【莹】【看】【到】【一】【个】【白】【发】【苍】【苍】【的】【老】【奶】【奶】【倒】【在】【马】【路】【边】【,】【就】【毫】【不】【犹】【豫】【地】【把】【她】【扶】【了】【起】【来】【,】【并】【热】【情】【地】【把】【她】【送】【到】【了】【家】【,】【更】【让】【人】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【是】【,】【这】【个】【老】【奶】【奶】【竞】【是】【班】【主】【任】【的】【丈】【母】【娘】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【原】【以】【为】【做】【人】【只】【要】【管】【好】【自】【己】【就】【行】【,】【根】【本】【不】【需】【要】【“】【多】【管】【闲】【事】【”】【。】【因】【为】【我】【早】【听】【到】【有】【一】【句】【话】【叫】【“】【各】【人】【自】【扫】【门】【前】【雪】【,】【休】【管】【他】【人】【瓦】【上】【霜】【”】【。】【(】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【北】【京】【市】【中】【考】【作】【文】【《】【日】【积】【月】【累】【》】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【样】【的】【叙】【事】【就】【非】【常】【平】【淡】【,】【也】【不】【能】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【。】【同】【样】【的】【内】【容】【,】【如】【果】【我】【们】【换】【一】【种】【构】【思】【,】【文】【章】【立】【刻】【就】【会】【生】【动】【许】【多】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【原】【以】【为】【做】【人】【只】【要】【管】【好】【自】【己】【就】【行】【,】【根】【本】【不】【需】【要】【“】【多】【管】【闲】【事】【”】【。】【因】【为】【我】【早】【听】【到】【有】【一】【句】【话】【叫】【“】【各】【人】【自】【扫】【门】【前】【雪】【,】【休】【管】【他】【人】【瓦】【上】【霜】【”】【。】【直】【到】【那】【件】【事】【的】【发】【生】【才】【彻】【底】【改】【变】【了】【我】【对】【人】【生】【日】【积】【月】【累】【的】【看】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【文】【课】【正】【在】【进】【行】【,】【从】【未】【迟】【到】【过】【的】【班】【长】【张】【莹】【,】【在】【上】【午】【第】【一】【节】【课】【快】【要】【结】【束】【的】【时】【候】【,】【才】【上】【气】【不】【接】【下】【气】【地】【出】【现】【在】【教】【室】【门】【口】【。】【为】【了】【不】【影】【响】【上】【课】【,】【正】【在】【上】【课】【的】【老】【师】【,】【只】【是】【向】【她】【点】【了】【点】【头】【,】【示】【意】【她】【先】【进】【教】【室】【上】【课】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【心】【想】【,】【这】【下】【班】【长】【要】【倒】【霉】【了】【吧】【!】【平】【时】【就】【喜】【欢】【多】【管】【闲】【事】【的】【她】【,】【这】【下】【不】【知】【道】【又】【管】【了】【件】【什】【么】【闲】【事】【,】【以】【至】【于】【耽】【误】【了】【上】【课】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【想】【到】【上】【午】【第】【四】【节】【班】【会】【,】【班】【主】【任】【竟】【表】【扬】【了】【她】【。】【原】【来】【今】【天】【早】【上】【在】【去】【上】【学】【的】【路】【上】【,】【张】【莹】【看】【到】【一】【个】【白】【发】【苍】【苍】【的】【老】【奶】【奶】【倒】【在】【马】【路】【边】【,】【就】【亳】【不】【犹】【豫】【地】【把】【她】【扶】【了】【起】【来】【,】【并】【热】【情】【地】【把】【她】【送】【到】【了】【家】【。】【更】【让】【人】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【是】【,】【这】【个】【老】【奶】【奶】【竟】【是】【班】【主】【任】【的】【丈】【母】【娘】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【改】【后】【的】【片】【段】【,】【虽】【然】【也】【是】【倒】【叙】【;】【但】【增】【加】【了】【人】【物】【的】【心】【理】【描】【写】【、】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【情】【节】【曲】【折】【有】【味】【而】【富】【有】【悬】【念】【,】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【,】【而】【且】【点】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【为】【了】【避】【免】【平】【铺】【直】【叙】【的】【弊】【端】【,】【可】【以】【从】【—】【件】【事】【的】【结】【果】【写】【起】【,】【也】【可】【以】【从】【一】【件】【事】【的】【中】【间】【写】【起】【,】【还】【可】【以】【用】【一】【件】【事】【来】【引】【出】【另】【一】【件】【事】【(】【当】【然】【也】【要】【有】【主】【次】【之】【分】【)】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【感】【情】【欠】【真】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【无】【论】【何】【种】【题】【材】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【都】【应】【该】【写】【出】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【这】【也】【是】【一】【类】【文】【得】【分】【的】【一】【个】【重】【要】【标】【准】【。】【然】【而】【,】【有】【的】【同】【学】【认】【为】【只】【要】【把】【事】【件】【叙】【述】【清】【楚】【就】【可】【以】【了】【,】【由】【于】【没】【有】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【内】【容】【显】【得】【枯】【燥】【乏】【味】【;】【相】【反】【,】【有】【的】【同】【学】【为】【了】【写】【出】【“】【真】【情】【实】【感】【”】【而】【弄】【虚】【作】【假】【。】【请】【看】【下】【例】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【有】【天】【夜】【里】【,】【我】【因】【为】【打】【摆】【子】【浑】【身】【发】【冷】【,】【躺】【在】【床】【上】【翻】【来】【覆】【去】【地】【睡】【不】【着】【。】【外】【婆】【听】【到】【我】【的】【声】【音】【,】【感】【觉】【有】【点】【儿】【不】【对】【,】【赶】【紧】【起】【床】【,】【用】【手】【摸】【摸】【我】【身】【上】【:】【“】【呀】【,】【小】【敏】【。】【你】【怎】【么】【在】【发】【抖】【呀】【!】【得】【赶】【紧】【去】【医】【院】【!】【”】【说】【着】【外】【婆】【把】【我】【抱】【起】【来】【,】【就】【往】【医】【院】【跑】【。】【我】【躺】【在】【外】【婆】【怀】【里】【,】【感】【觉】【外】【婆】【的】【胸】【怀】【是】【那】【么】【的】【温】【暖】【,】【外】【婆】【的】【脸】【庞】【是】【那】【么】【的】【慈】【祥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【别】【怕】【,】【就】【到】【医】【院】【了】【。】【”】【外】【婆】【一】【边】【跑】【,】【一】【边】【喘】【着】【气】【对】【我】【说】【。】【尽】【管】【马】【路】【上】【北】【风】【呼】【啸】【,】【可】【听】【了】【外】【婆】【这】【有】【温】【度】【的】【话】【语】【,】【我】【身】【上】【立】【刻】【感】【觉】【暖】【和】【多】【了】【。】【(】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【沈】【阳】【市】【中】【考】【作】【文】【《】【有】【温】【度】【的】【话】【语】【》】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【外】【婆】【把】【我】【抱】【起】【来】【,】【就】【往】【医】【院】【跑】【。】【”】【让】【人】【感】【觉】【有】【假】【。】【一】【是】【文】【中】【的】【“】【我】【”】【已】【是】【—】【个】【初】【中】【生】【,】【外】【婆】【不】【一】【定】【就】【能】【抱】【得】【动】【;】【二】【是】【现】【在】【的】【通】【信】【和】【交】【通】【都】【非】【常】【发】【达】【,】【外】【婆】【为】【何】【不】【打】【1】【2】【0】【急】【救】【电】【话】【,】【或】【者】【坐】【其】【他】【交】【通】【工】【具】【,】【这】【样】【不】【是】【更】【快】【吗】【?】【第】【三】【,】【既】【然】【是】【深】【夜】【,】【外】【婆】【的】【脸】【庞】【怎】【么】【可】【能】【看】【得】【清】【?】【下】【面】【的】【修】【改】【,】【就】【真】【实】【多】【了】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【说】【着】【外】【婆】【就】【给】【1】【2】【0】【打】【了】【电】【话】【,】【很】【快】【救】【护】【车】【来】【了】【。】【外】【婆】【手】【脚】【麻】【利】【地】【帮】【我】【穿】【好】【衣】【服】【,】【扶】【着】【我】【上】【了】【车】【。】【在】【车】【上】【,】【我】【躺】【在】【外】【婆】【怀】【里】【,】【感】【觉】【外】【婆】【的】【胸】【怀】【是】【那】【么】【的】【温】【暖】【,】【借】【着】【车】【内】【的】【灯】【光】【,】【我】【发】【现】【外】【婆】【的】【脸】【庞】【是】【那】【么】【的】【慈】【祥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【别】【怕】【,】【就】【到】【医】【院】【了】【。】【”】【外】【婆】【慈】【爱】【地】【摸】【着】【我】【的】【头】【安】【慰】【我】【。】【尽】【管】【马】【路】【上】【冷】【风】【呼】【啸】【,】【可】【听】【了】【外】【婆】【这】【有】【温】【度】【的】【话】【语】【,】【我】【身】【上】【立】【刻】【感】【觉】【温】【暖】【了】【许】【多】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【通】【过】【以】【上】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【只】【有】【所】【叙】【之】【事】【符】【合】【生】【活】【的】【情】【理】【,】【才】【有】【可】【能】【写】【出】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【的】【同】【学】【或】【许】【会】【问】【,】【记】【叙】【文】【可】【不】【可】【以】【虚】【构】【?】【回】【答】【是】【:】【可】【以】【。】【但】【尽】【可】【能】【写】【生】【活】【中】【的】【实】【事】【,】【也】【可】【以】【把】【发】【生】【在】【别】【人】【身】【上】【的】【事】【“】【嫁】【接】【”】【到】【自】【己】【身】【上】【,】【即】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【所】【说】【的】【“】【杂】【取】【种】【种】【人】【,】【合】【成】【一】【个】【”】【,】【这】【样】【就】【比】【较】【容】【易】【写】【出】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【立】【意】【欠】【深】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【立】【意】【即】【文】【章】【所】【要】【表】【达】【的】【主】【题】【。】【所】【谓】【立】【意】【深】【,】【就】【是】【所】【表】【现】【的】【主】【题】【不】【是】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【的】【,】【而】【是】【新】【颖】【独】【到】【,】【给】【人】【以】【启】【发】【鼓】【舞】【。】【有】【的】【同】【学】【写】【中】【考】【作】【文】【(】【特】【别】【是】【写】【材】【料】【作】【文】【和】【话】【题】【作】【文】【)】【时】【,】【不】【去】【深】【入】【分】【析】【现】【象】【背】【后】【的】【本】【质】【,】【也】【不】【去】【探】【究】【问】【题】【形】【成】【的】【深】【层】【原】【因】【,】【只】【是】【表】【面】【上】【浮】【光】【掠】【影】【地】【说】【一】【说】【,】【谈】【一】【谈】【,】【或】【就】【事】【论】【事】【,】【这】【就】【是】【立】【意】【欠】【深】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【湖】【南】【邵】【阳】【中】【考】【作】【文】【(】【二】【选】【一】【)】【,】【要】【求】【以】【“】【冬】【天】【里】【的】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【”】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【的】【作】【文】【(】【文】【体】【不】【限】【)】【。】【有】【的】【同】【学】【确】【立】【的】【主】【题】【是】【:】【冬】【天】【里】【的】【阳】【光】【无】【比】【温】【暖】【,】【人】【们】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【快】【乐】【的】【生】【活】【;】【有】【的】【同】【学】【确】【立】【的】【主】【题】【是】【:】【万】【物】【生】【长】【靠】【太】【阳】【,】【冬】【日】【里】【人】【和】【动】【植】【物】【都】【格】【外】【需】【要】【阳】【光】【;】【有】【的】【同】【学】【确】【立】【的】【主】【题】【是】【:】【冬】【天】【里】【人】【们】【渴】【望】【阳】【光】【的】【温】【暖】【,】【尤】【其】【冰】【天】【雪】【地】【的】【时】【候】【,】【等】【等】【。】【很】【明】【显】【以】【上】【立】【意】【都】【是】【从】【太】【阳】【的】【本】【义】【出】【发】【,】【没】【有】【上】【升】【到】【一】【个】【哲】【理】【的】【高】【度】【。】【而】【有】【的】【同】【学】【从】【“】【亲】【情】【(】【或】【友】【情】【)】【就】【像】【是】【冬】【日】【里】【的】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【”】【来】【立】【意】【,】【就】【深】【刻】【多】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【只】【有】【透】【过】【事】【物】【的】【现】【象】【来】【观】【照】【生】【活】【,】【感】【悟】【生】【活】【,】【揭】【示】【事】【物】【与】【生】【活】【的】【内】【在】【联】【系】【,】【方】【能】【立】【意】【深】【刻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【用】【语】【欠】【准】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【具】【体】【表】【现】【在】【用】【语】【不】【够】【得】【体】【,】【不】【能】【做】【到】【文】【从】【句】【顺】【,】【语】【言】【欠】【生】【动】【,】【缺】【乏】【文】【采】【,】【甚】【至】【有】【错】【字】【病】【句】【等】【。】【如】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【中】【时】【代】【,】【正】【是】【人】【生】【的】【花】【季】【,】【也】【是】【我】【们】【最】【快】【乐】【最】【富】【有】【激】【情】【的】【时】【代】【,】【同】【样】【也】【是】【我】【们】【最】【懵】【懂】【、】【头】【脑】【最】【容】【易】【发】【热】【的】【时】【代】【。】【所】【以】【,】【我】【们】【还】【需】【要】【父】【母】【的】【指】【导】【,】【老】【师】【的】【教】【诲】【,】【我】【们】【必】【须】【学】【会】【从】【小】【事】【做】【起】【,】【比】【如】【做】【最】【简】【单】【的】【饭】【菜】【,】【练】【习】【洗】【自】【己】【的】【衣】【服】【,】【自】【己】【收】【拾】【房】【间】【等】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【于】【是】【,】【我】【们】【渐】【渐】【明】【白】【一】【个】【道】【理】【—】【—】【学】【会】【自】【立】【,】【因】【为】【总】【有】【一】【天】【,】【我】【们】【要】【离】【开】【父】【母】【自】【己】【来】【成】【家】【立】【业】【。】【(】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【安】【徽】【省】【中】【考】【作】【文】【《】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【》】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【样】【的】【用】【语】【实】【在】【是】【淡】【而】【无】【味】【,】【尽】【管】【说】【的】【都】【是】【大】【实】【话】【,】【却】【毫】【无】【文】【采】【可】【言】【。】【如】【果】【我】【们】【能】【展】【开】【想】【象】【,】【适】【当】【地】【使】【用】【一】【些】【比】【喻】【、】【对】【偶】【、】【拟】【人】【等】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【语】【言】【立】【刻】【就】【会】【生】【动】【起】【来】【。】【下】【面】【是】【—】【个】【同】【学】【对】【此】【所】【作】【的】【修】【改】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【中】【时】【代】【,】【正】【值】【人】【生】【的】【花】【季】【。】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【,】【看】【天】【,】【天】【是】【蓝】【的】【;】【看】【水】【,】【水】【是】【绿】【的】【。】【走】【在】【路】【上】【,】【花】【儿】【向】【我】【点】【头】【笑】【,】【风】【儿】【伴】【我】【低】【声】【唱】【,】【阳】【光】【暖】【在】【我】【心】【间】【…】【…】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【美】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【,】【说】【懵】【懂】【也】【不】【尽】【然】【,】【说】【冷】【静】【有】【时】【头】【脑】【也】【发】【热】【。】【许】【多】【时】【候】【,】【许】【多】【事】【情】【,】【还】【需】【要】【父】【母】【的】【指】【点】【和】【帮】【助】【,】【许】【多】【道】【理】【还】【需】【要】【老】【师】【来】【点】【拨】【和】【启】【发】【。】【于】【是】【,】【属】【于】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【的】【我】【们】【还】【是】【从】【生】【活】【中】【的】【小】【事】【做】【起】【吧】【!】【我】【们】【开】【始】【学】【做】【最】【简】【单】【的】【饭】【菜】【,】【练】【习】【洗】【自】【己】【的】【衣】【服】【,】【像】【妈】【妈】【那】【样】【尝】【试】【把】【自】【己】【的】【房】【间】【收】【拾】【得】【整】【齐】【干】【净】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【们】【明】【白】【一】【个】【道】【理】【:】【要】【长】【大】【,】【就】【要】【学】【会】【自】【立】【。】【因】【为】【父】【母】【的】【羽】【翼】【再】【温】【暖】【,】【总】【有】【一】【天】【我】【们】【也】【要】【靠】【自】【己】【的】【翅】【膀】【飞】【翔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【上】【例】【不】【难】【看】【出】【,】【用】【语】【准】【确】【的】【方】【法】【是】【适】【当】【地】【使】【用】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【(】【如】【上】【例】【就】【使】【用】【了】【比】【喻】【、】【排】【比】【、】【拟】【人】【和】【对】【偶】【等】【修】【辞】【)】【,】【选】【用】【富】【有】【表】【现】【力】【的】【词】【语】【(】【主】【要】【是】【动】【词】【、】【形】【容】【词】【和】【成】【语】【)】【,】【有】【时】【候】【还】【可】【以】【恰】【当】【地】【引】【用】【名】【言】【和】【俗】【语】【等】【等】【。】

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【<】【p】【>】【我】【住】【在】【一】【个】【宽】【敞】【的】【大】【房】【子】【里】【。】【里】【面】【住】【着】【我】【的】【五】【胞】【姐】【弟】【。】【房】【子】【的】【壁】【纸】【是】【淡】【绿】【色】【的】【,】【正】【反】【面】【的】【正】【中】【印】【一】【个】【双】【箭】【头】【,】【它】【可】【是】【我】【们】【的】【族】【徽】【呢】【!】【双】【箭】【头】【中】【间】【和】【双】【箭】【头】【上】【下】【都】【印】【有】【英】【文】【,】【意】【思】【是】【绿】【箭】【口】【香】【糖】【。】【双】【箭】【头】【两】【旁】【分】【别】【有】【两】【颗】【深】【绿】【色】【的】【、】【茁】【壮】【成】【长】【的】【薄】【荷】【,】【这】【可】【是】【我】【们】【家】【簇】【的】【另】【一】【个】【象】【征】【性】【代】【表】【我】【们】【身】【份】【的】【标】【志】【。】【在】【房】【子】【的】【侧】【面】【,】【有】【我】【的】【出】【生】【时】【间】【、】【出】【生】【地】【址】【等】【,】【能】【让】【你】【们】【加】【深】【对】【我】【的】【了】【解】【哦】【!】【<】【/】【p】【>】看直播【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【过】【得】【真】【快】【,】【又】【到】【周】【末】【了】【,】【望】【着】【窗】【外】【皎】【洁】【的】【月】【光】【,】【我】【忽】【然】【想】【起】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【—】【—】【那】【个】【曾】【留】【下】【我】【童】【年】【记】【忆】【的】【地】【方】【。】【(】【开】【头】【直】【接】【点】【出】【心】【中】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【很】【好】【地】【引】【出】【了】【下】【文】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【印】【象】【中】【的】【家】【乡】【小】【巷】【是】【美】【丽】【无】【比】【的】【。】【它】【四】【通】【八】【达】【,】【幽】【深】【曲】【折】【,】【宛】【若】【一】【张】【脉】【络】【分】【明】【的】【网】【。】【每】【一】【条】【小】【巷】【都】【铺】【着】【青】【石】【板】【,】【两】【边】【是】【低】【矮】【而】【拥】【挤】【的】【小】【阁】【楼】【,】【屋】【檐】【向】【前】【挑】【着】【,】【显】【得】【古】【朴】【、】【典】【雅】【,】【似】【乎】【与】【外】【面】【的】【喧】【闹】【、】【繁】【华】【极】【不】【协】【调】【。】【(】【这】【里】【重】【点】【介】【绍】【小】【巷】【中】【的】【屋】【檐】【,】【突】【出】【了】【其】【古】【朴】【、】【典】【雅】【之】【美】【。】【)】【然】【而】【,】【当】【你】【独】【行】【在】【小】【巷】【时】【,】【听】【着】【脚】【踏】【青】【石】【板】【发】【出】【的】【“】【啪】【啪】【”】【声】【和】【水】【滴】【的】【溅】【落】【声】【,】【再】【向】【前】【望】【,】【小】【巷】【尽】【头】【透】【着】【时】【隐】【时】【现】【的】【灯】【光】【,】【你】【会】【忽】【然】【感】【到】【一】【阵】【舒】【畅】【,】【一】【阵】【温】【馨】【。】【(】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【,】【尽】【展】【小】【巷】【清】【新】【、】【幽】【深】【之】【美】【。】【)】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【清】【新】【、】【自】【然】【,】【不】【加】【任】【何】【修】【饰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【巷】【里】【的】【热】【闹】【景】【象】【是】【永】【远】【让】【人】【怀】【念】【的】【。】【每】【到】【傍】【晚】【,】【忙】【碌】【了】【一】【天】【的】【人】【们】【回】【到】【家】【,】【听】【吧】【,】【小】【巷】【会】【奏】【出】【一】【首】【锅】【碗】【瓢】【盆】【交】【响】【曲】【。】【接】【着】【,】【一】【股】【夹】【杂】【着】【各】【种】【味】【道】【的】【气】【味】【便】【弥】【漫】【在】【狭】【窄】【的】【小】【巷】【中】【了】【。】【(】【这】【里】【综】【合】【调】【动】【视】【觉】【、】【听】【觉】【、】【嗅】【觉】【等】【感】【觉】【,】【表】【现】【了】【小】【巷】【生】【活】【的】【热】【闹】【和】【温】【馨】【,】【读】【来】【让】【人】【神】【往】【。】【)】【孩】【子】【们】【在】【天】【井】【里】【追】【逐】【打】【闹】【:】【有】【的】【逗】【着】【小】【狗】【乱】【窜】【,】【有】【的】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【正】【玩】【儿】【得】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【,】【有】【的】【蹑】【手】【蹑】【脚】【地】【偷】【摘】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【的】【鸟】【笼】【…】【…】【嬉】【笑】【打】【闹】【为】【平】【静】【的】【小】【巷】【注】【入】【了】【活】【力】【。】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【仰】【面】【躺】【在】【太】【师】【椅】【上】【,】【悠】【然】【地】【听】【着】【收】【音】【机】【,】【不】【时】【地】【哼】【上】【几】【句】【…】【…】【此】【时】【,】【小】【巷】【又】【像】【一】【张】【风】【情】【画】【,】【没】【有】【什】【么】【大】【红】【大】【绿】【,】【却】【透】【着】【一】【股】【朴】【实】【—】【—】【朴】【实】【的】【人】【,】【朴】【实】【的】【生】【活】【。】【(】【景】【物】【描】【写】【之】【后】【,】【简】【要】【地】【以】【景】【寓】【情】【,】【既】【表】【现】【了】【作】【者】【对】【小】【巷】【的】【无】【限】【热】【爱】【之】【情】【,】【也】【有】【力】【地】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【起】【小】【巷】【,】【我】【小】【时】【候】【安】【静】【地】【靠】【在】【奶】【奶】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【乘】【凉】【的】【情】【景】【又】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【浮】【现】【在】【眼】【前】【。】【晚】【上】【,】【人】【们】【都】【歇】【了】【,】【小】【巷】【显】【得】【很】【寂】【静】【,】【只】【有】【一】【些】【小】【虫】【仍】【然】【不】【闲】【着】【。】【我】【依】【偎】【在】【奶】【奶】【怀】【中】【,】【望】【着】【黑】【洞】【洞】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【无】【边】【无】【际】【。】【这】【时】【,】【月】【亮】【已】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【爬】【上】【来】【,】【淡】【淡】【的】【月】【光】【泻】【在】【石】【板】【路】【上】【,】【像】【一】【盆】【水】【泼】【在】【上】【面】【,】【静】【静】【地】【滚】【动】【。】【奶】【奶】【一】【边】【轻】【轻】【摇】【着】【蒲】【扇】【,】【一】【边】【哼】【着】【儿】【歌】【。】【一】【阵】【微】【风】【带】【着】【花】【儿】【淡】【淡】【的】【清】【香】【拂】【过】【面】【庞】【,】【我】【真】【要】【醉】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【仿】【佛】【是】【大】【海】【中】【泊】【着】【的】【一】【叶】【小】【舟】【,】【而】【我】【就】【躺】【在】【它】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【。】【月】【光】【像】【为】【我】【盖】【上】【一】【层】【薄】【被】【,】【船】【在】【轻】【轻】【摇】【动】【,】【我】【的】【心】【也】【随】【之】【微】【微】【荡】【漾】【…】【…】【(】【比】【喻】【新】【奇】【而】【优】【美】【,】【给】【人】【以】【无】【尽】【的】【联】【想】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【虫】【声】【啾】【啾】【,】【叫】【醒】【了】【我】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【我】【离】【开】【家】【乡】【已】【好】【几】【年】【了】【,】【再】【也】【听】【不】【见】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【,】【再】【也】【看】【不】【到】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【小】【巷】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【吗】【?】【奶】【奶】【依】【旧】【在】【月】【夜】【下】【哼】【着】【歌】【吗】【?】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【奶】【奶】【老】【了】【;】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【我】【已】【难】【得】【再】【见】【了】【,】【只】【有】【月】【光】【依】【旧】【皎】【洁】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【什】【么】【时】【候】【再】【回】【到】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【呢】【?】【(】【结】【尾】【既】【回】【应】【了】【标】【题】【,】【也】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【,】【达】【到】【了】【言】【有】【尽】【而】【意】【无】【穷】【的】【效】【果】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【评】【点】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【优】【美】【的】【写】【景】【抒】【情】【的】【佳】【作】【。】【文】【章】【由】【表】【及】【里】【,】【由】【物】【到】【人】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【对】【家】【乡】【及】【亲】【人】【的】【思】【念】【之】【情】【,】【感】【染】【力】【很】【强】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【在】【写】【作】【上】【有】【一】【个】【鲜】【明】【的】【特】【点】【,】【那】【就】【是】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【优】【美】【,】【给】【人】【以】【非】【常】【形】【象】【具】【体】【的】【感】【受】【。】【文】【章】【描】【写】【小】【巷】【既】【调】【动】【了】【各】【种】【感】【觉】【来】【展】【现】【小】【巷】【的】【特】【点】【,】【又】【综】【合】【运】【用】【各】【种】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【来】【突】【出】【小】【巷】【的】【特】【征】【,】【读】【来】【我】【们】【也】【仿】【佛】【置】【身】【于】【小】【巷】【之】【中】【,】【给】【人】【以】【身】【临】【其】【境】【之】【感】【。】

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